Torpid

The human force of Capt. Malakai, Christopher McDermott, Jefferey Dore and a troop of marines managed to press back the invaders momentarily. But soon, the enemy recovered from the unexpected ...

Well, i got the idea of a random fight scene from Phoenix and now im gunna try out my own, even though there are tons of other stuff i should ...

i am very animated TPBM is a were elephant

cool, i gotta drop some stories cuz i cant handle all of mine and sometimes, i just get such bad writers block that i wanna scrap the stroy, sometimes years ...

Well, its definetly good, we all know that. Ever Onward, is this the only story your doing? ~Torpid

Well, please give all comments, any comments really, i rewrote most of it... Joker Squad descended through the scorched metallic catwalks at a frantic pase. Christopher was just behind his ...

Guys if u like this story then help cuz i dont know what comes next, i wanted to have an interesting encounter w/ some guy from the Leadslinger's past but ...

Well i wrote like a lot of freakin crap yesterday but this site expired or something and i lost it all so i guess i'll just be starting over....

good story, u kinda left us hangin but it was good and ure not hitting stops or slowing the story down so I give it a b, low a. Ever ...

Romien picked up the pack and looked at them, “Well, we might as well get started… we can handle a bit of heat can’t we?” He stepped into the desert ...

Honestly, i think it needs a lot of revision but i dont know anyone in their right minds who would revise that HUMONGO story so i guess thats up to ...

It was late when i wrote it so crit lots, i think it could be better but im tired so, its your turn now The three men swapped looks at ...

I dunno man, i've heard stories but uh... all i know for sure is that reading this forum in a dark room at night with only the computer on for ...

Well i really dont care if i lose ten points even tho i dont have that many BUT what is the point? AND, about the euryoon dollar thingies, i say ...

Well, it was definetly a cool subject and has potential but i'd say a little revision and slight editing would do it good. Spaces in the writing, sentence structure, and ...