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i have to do a persuasive essay too, due tommorow, its not as good as yours, lol. oh well nice work Me

IVE NEVER EALLY THOUGHT OF IT BUT THE EDGES oh sorry, im in caps, but the edges of a flat world being cloaked in fog sounds really cool!!!!

dude i feel sorry if thats the funniest thing youve seen in a long time. stupid people, oh my gosh. that was like stupid funny,lol

lol my grammar sux! anywayz, thanks guys ill edit this and then repost the next later.... oh and firestarter, he heard of the thugs from a friend, a trusted friend. ...

in my opinion that doesnt sound right becuase i tihnk the boy would probably have bolted, scared beyond his wits, and tried to look every which way to cover himself. ...

i made my thing private, dont let people i dont know be my friend, and i only talk to my buddies. i keep safe, its only dangerous if your....foolish. i ...

yea ill click, only ONCE per WEEK? though. thats not verymuch.

hola. welcome. hows life? u can ask me if u need help with anything (ill try to help u, really ill do my best). Its a pretty friendly site, plenty ...

well anybody interested in a fantasy write? Kinda DND rpg adventure story. i have plenty of characters, names, ideas but i always get screwed up after i start. u could ...

idunno, 6-7/10

good. i would like to see more of the vikings with the cross.

i agree with firestarter. i tihnk this was very good and would like to see more. the theme/idea of irish immigrants going to america during the famine is original, well ...

Aerne Core eased his ship down onto the Coruscanti landing platform, deep down into the planet where sunlight sometimes did not reach and the buildings seemed to be cloaked in ...

I THOUGHT, oh sorry, I thought, it was a 'cute' lil story. it was nice and simple and kinda...silly? It wasnt 'overly' anything but it was entertaining.

Im a lil interested, i think it could use some light revision if you wanted. Nothing too extreme though. It could also use a twist so it doesnt become an ...