Tomothy_Mayhem

Thanks heaps for the review! fixed the errors in my copy (haven't updated the forum copy). Anyone else?

Reviews would be appreciated. Thanks

do I smell an appearance of Odin or someone similar?

thanks! I'll get to it. Please read chapter II if you like it. -Tom

Thanks heaps guys! I'll post Chapter II up now :) I've gone through and edited the story Lauren. Thanks again, and hope you enjoy Chapter II, -Tom