TolyVilapoo

HEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYY Thanks for all the great feedback people. hmm I'v gone over the poem and edited it. I still fell i could make a few more adjustments, just wondering what ...

Hey Thanks life, had you not pointed out the exclamation marks to me i would never have realised. I hope to repost the story with your suggestions. Thanks for the ...

lol Bozi that's a friend you hitting out at there. lol Thanks for the help though, I've been workiong on revising the poem, like I said I wrote this quite ...

Hehe. Thats my style. I need to grow out of it though. Its hard thinking like that!