TolyVilapoo

Hehe. Thats my style. I need to grow out of it though. Its hard thinking like that!

Hey pal. Lol I like the title introspection, it really is what your poem is all about. Maybe play around with the meaning of introspection and the thoughts you had ...

Heya. . . Hmm interesting storyline. Usually what I do before doing my characters i develop my general story. The best way to start is exactly what you have, a ...

Hey. Im new to the site was hoping you could help review some of my works and give me a few ideas. I don't mind if u be harsh, because ...

Hey. Im new to the site was hoping you could help review some of my works and give me a few ideas. I don't mind if u be harsh, because ...

Hi. I feel special being the first person to give you a review. Lol. I must say your storyline is good. Your descriptions of the girls feelings and emotions during ...

The sun sat drooping slightly over the arid landscape. The earth was hard and sparsely vegetated; the imprint of hundreds of running feet from over the years was prominent. The ...

Bozi Love the idea. The simple fact that you used such a simple artwork to describe a topic so broad, is amazing! As the saying goes a picture is worth ...

Relatively good start to a poem. You should look into it again and change it a bit. Try and get a better rhyme scheme n rhytm going. The fact that ...

Hmm great start 2 a seemingly excellent story. The story is very intresting, has captured my attention already. Now that you have your audiences attention keep it there and continue ...

He looked out at the beach, she sat safely within his reach. He spoke to the three, who gazed at him happily. His two sons ran out onto the shore, ...

Hey I'm Toly and this is the first review I will be doing on this site. . . Don't wether you should be happy or I should. Hehe. I must ...