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8.A State Of Trance... Welcome to the new world... The words I hear every week, Just before my entire being is rolled, Giving my mind a little tweak. The music ...

7.Happiness Much like a zombie nation We’ve become. We fail to see that happiness is not the station, But rather it’s the train weighing that ton. What is this? You ...

6.A trip to the depths of my heart... There’s a place reserved, For all those special Be them here or gone. Some places bigger while others tiny, But still they’ve ...

Wow this story was just amazing. Enjoyed it completely! Has immense potential! The story line was great, and the climax, GREAT! I can see this as an unbelievable novel with ...

5.The winter wind The promises of yesterday are gone As winter slowly sets in. Yet the drop in temperatures are not done, As down the mountain come... The winter wind. ...

A friend and my niece inspired this one. still could be a bit better i feel. 4.)Pizza She pulled my leg and pointed to the open pizzarette, “Papa can we ...

Hey I found this piece absolutely Hilarius! I feel sorry for all the people that screw with you hehe. don't really see how you can improve it, because it was ...

3.)God is Key He sent a man so high, yet humble. To teach us not 2 fumble and tumble, Into the harms of this ravishing earth For we may just ...

Hey I liked this poem quite a bit, just i felt that at times there were a little inconsistencies, but not in the poem it self but rather you writing. ...

I gazed out of my window, As the breaking of the morning light, Slowly streamed in. Oh! So bright. But before I could shield my eyes with my pillow I ...

2.)The precise and mighty I gazed out of my window As the morning light Streamed in. Oh! So bright. But before I could shield my eyes with my pillow I ...

Heya Thanks for the review, and yes I was actually trying to go with a Shakespearean sonnet. I think the reason i change the tone so well, is because I ...

Hey loved the imagery in this poem. the way you've portrayed the dolls emotions just wonderful. Imagery was vivid and clear in my minds eye. lol though at times i ...

Hey... I really enjoyed this poem!!! The best poetry is often the ones we can relate to best, and I'm pretty sure almost every writer can relate to this poem. ...

Hey thanks for the reviews... first the reason why this poem was so short was that i was having an attempt at writing a sonnet. I know I could have ...