TolyVilapoo

hey It's Toly here to review... and the first one too!! hehe I watched as another man fell beneath "beneath." alone does't sound all that right, you could say, "beneath ...

Hey... @ Kristen: Children are all the same they find some way to weasel us into giving in! lol I've got 2 nephews, and a niece, imagine how i feel! ...

Hey everyone. Thanks for the reviews! @soul... The bleater refer to other teachers, who just come and bleat away their work lol, whereas the teacher I wrote this for, used ...

shower My little sanctuary really, My place of rest, The place I relax after the everyday test. I’m lucky when I’m early, Why? Well firstly the hot waters still there! ...

Tanya:) Here for a review hehe. Mama, wake up! “Mama, wake up.” Jasmine peered over the handle bars keeping her mama safely tucked in bed. She couldn’t see her Mama’s ...

WOW!!! This poem is featured!! Thanks everyone! Still kinda shocked and surprised! TOLY!!!!!!!!!!!!

She tried moulding me into a brilliant tool. Even though I always played a fool Yet deep down I always knew Her work was undoubtedly true! She was more than ...

Hey Thanks for all the advice and pointing out my mistakes, glad I've got reviewers like these! hehe I've edited it slightly and tried my best to use all the ...

Hey Thanks for the review, great encouragement! Oh and by the way, its South African.lol Need to really steal myself some time to work properly on this one... Slowly getting ...

Hey!!!:) Thanks Tanya those links are helping me quite a bit, I was busy reading through them now hehe. The thing is this was originally done as a competition entry, ...

Heya Thanks for the reviews guys, its greatly appreciated. hehe Micky you should here her in reality! She ma be unbelievably cute, but by God can she nag!! Its no ...

Hey The name alone just thrilled me, the contents just blew me!! Humans are way to predictable... I say that like I'm some sort of alien lol. I enjoyed the ...

She pulled my leg and pointed to the open pizzarette, “Papa, can we go?” With just those little words, I was in her net. A dangerous place to be, As ...

Hey thanks for the review! About the starting, I'm going over it, and trying to fix it up, glad you pointed it out. lol ooops the grammar kinda slipped me ...

9.More than just a teacher She tried moulding me into a brilliant tool. Even though I always played a fool Yet deep down I always knew Her work was undoubtedly ...