TokioHotelVampire

Britt's Perspective "I HATE HER SO MUCH! WHY IS SHE HANGING OUT WITH BILL WHEN IT SHOULD BE ME BY HIS SIDE?! I'M HIS GIRLFRIEND! SHE'S BRAINWASHED HIM TO THINK ...

To ASingleDarkRose: The relationship between Britt and Lexis is complicated. After reading your reply, I think now I'll add some bonus chapters that are about Britt's and Lexis' relationship and ...

I want to delete my account. How do I delete it but keep my work published on here? :?

The love inside is dying The love inside is trying To give you a message Through some sort of passage That punches a hole Inside my soul The strangest of ...

Lexis's Perspective "Let's go dance!" We've finished dinner and I keep begging to Bill to go dance. "Lexis, no. We just ate. What if we get sick?" "We won't! We're ...

I really appreciate all the reviewing you're doing to my story. You're giving me so many tips and hints and I am definitley using them in the future! I just ...

Lexis's Perspective "COME ON BILL! Tell me where we're going!" I plead with puppy dog eyes. "I keep telling you that it is a surprise." I pout and cross my ...

Hey there Emalily! I like the lyrics a whole lot! But somehow, when i'm reading them, I'm thinking that this song would be only a minute and a half while ...

I like it. It sounds like a Breaking Dawn 2, and instead of Bella and Edward, it's Renesmee and Jacob. I really hope you keep writing the story. It's very ...

I like the idea of a gothic-rockish-metalish song. These are good lyrics, but not for the goth part. It's more of an emo song. When I saw the words "...and ...

BZZ.BZZZZ. "What about that band in town for a few weeks?" "I listened to their music and they were wicked awesome!" "I thought I saw the singer walking his dog ...

This is good. I do agree, it is a little repeative, but otherwise, very good. I really like your writing. :) It is very full with emotions and makes me ...

Thanks for the reviews. I appreciate them. I'm not used to the whole writing scene because I'm still a little new to it, but this is a major story i've ...

This is great! I love Tokio Hotel and to see there's actually some fan-fictions about them on here is so cool. I'm writing one too. This story has given me ...

This is good. I think for the most part, though, it's for Twilight fans, myself for example. I do want to know what happens. A vampire, werewolf, human hybrid would ...