Titch123

Just read chapter one and this is as good as the first so well done just a couple of things: I groaned as I rolled out of my bed. I ...

Really good opening section!! I didnt spot any glaring problems and i thought it was a fantastic set up for the next parts of the story. The names were really ...

This is very good, i am always wary when a person either re-writes, updates or continues a fairytale because it is so easy to mess up and even the most ...

That is a beautifully well written piece and i enjoyed reading it! However its very complex and at times it doesnt seemed to flow very well. However the tone of ...

Firstly i really enjoyed reading this story and look forward to seeing how it pans out further on in the story. It began very well and really drew me into ...