Titch123

Hi, Really good start enjoyed the story and would like to read more just a couple of things i picked up on: For the (night-time) fixtures, floodlights would illuminate the ...

I Dont Know How To Start The Next Part, So Any Suggestions Are Very Welcome And As Always Any Constructive Critisism Is Greatfully Received! Hope You Enjoy Titch x

The door creaked open I hardly dare look up as the knot of fear in by stomach tighten to a new level. “Comfort?” Lucas asked softly and as the old ...

Its a good start but really it needs expanding alot, its much to short. I'm sorry to go over that point again coz i think every one has. I just ...

Hi I really enjoyed reading this and i thought it was a great idea for a layout, very unusual but works really well i just picked up on a couple ...

I think this is a really interesting concept for a story and would be interested to see how it progresses if you decide to run with it. Just a couple ...

Hi Everyone, I've posted this story before a few months ago but I've just moved back to university after the summer so I've been a little bit distracted. So I ...

The Vampires Kiss I was sat opposite him half dozing and half watching him fiddle with his weapons, cleaning his knives and sharpening his arrows. He saw me watching and ...

The Vampires Kiss (revised chapter 3) The sun broke through the curtains the next day causing me to blink awake I lay in the messy bed for a second just ...

Hi well done its a good chapter again. Just A couple of really small things i picked up on "I was awake and listening the night that stranger came to ...

hello again 3rd post in like 15mins lol but still very good, please PM me when more is written- i really need to know what happened that night so long ...

Just read chapter one and this is as good as the first so well done just a couple of things: I groaned as I rolled out of my bed. I ...

Really good opening section!! I didnt spot any glaring problems and i thought it was a fantastic set up for the next parts of the story. The names were really ...

The sun broke through the curtains the next day causing me to blink awake I lay in the messy bed for a second just remembering the night before with a ...

Tbh the last character i named was called comfort and thats because i was think about whiskey/borbon at the time and southern comfort came in to my head lol