Titan4ever

Hey! I really liked it, but I want to know more about the characters, like, how long has he had his"gift", and how he got his "gift. I would also ...

I really liked it, and I can't wait to read more. One thing I noticed didn't look right, to me anyways, was The light was on only three times a ...

Hey! I really like it! Not big on poetry, so I don't know if you could change anything. -Titan

I really liked your story! The twins seem so realistic, especially Alex. I know tons of girls (and guys)that are very picky about their nicknames. I'm pretty sure that a ...

I really liked this chapter! The fact that you used current events that scientists are studying is really cool too. I can't wait to read more about what happens! Keep ...

My name is Mariah Bristol. I am an orphan at the Lakewood orphanage, but I won’t be here much longer. A nice family is going to adopt me! They have ...

Hey! This is not something that I normally would read, but I kept reading till the end. You truly are a good writer. I noticed one thing though. With sucked ...

I would pick mystery, because I like trying to figure the mystery out before the characters do!

Prologue Name: Sarah Apperton “Everything is all set for Mariah Mrs.Apperton.” Linda Springfield said on the phone. “Thank You Linda. Lilia and Shawn are so excited that they are getting ...

Hey! I really liked it! Manly, I just noticed grammar/spelling/sentence structure isuues. Tommy was never allowed to play outside, too dangerous, Mum always said. It should be Tommy was never ...

Hey! I thought the story was great, and kind of ended just when things got to the climax. I noticed a couple of typos though. He knew that sitting in ...

I'm not quite a "poetry person" myself, but I really liked it. Hope you keep writing! -Titan

Hey Mikko! I thought your story was a good start. Two things popped out at me. aged only of four months. I think you should get rid of the of. ...

I really liked this chapter! It get's the reader hooked, and reading to the end. The only thing that caught my eye was this : ‘Them’..?’ I think it should ...

I really like it! It was a great addition to the writing you did in chapter one. Only one thing I noticed. “Pleasure to meet you-,” he glanced at the ...