Titan4ever

It's great! I can't wait to read the next one and find out how Jessica will handle getting closer to giving birth! -Titan

Hey Bug Bug! I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to review this. It is a great addition to the story. I noticed a couple of things though. ...

I'm reading the book "Supreme Courtship" By Christopher Buckley, and it has taken my vote for my favorite book. ( For the time at least.)

Hey! I love this book! I only found two things. Okay, I wasn’t going to call the cops, but I was tempted too. the too would be to. I mean, ...

I really liked it. It is a great addition to the story. Keep writing!!! -Titan

I'm guessing this is the second novel to the secret pack of hellwolves- which I just finished reading and think you should post- so it really dragged me in. I ...

Thanks! I added a lot about the character because all of my friends told me that they didn't know enough.

Chapter Three: Shawn Name: Lilia Apperton Hi! My name is Lilia Apperton. Shawn is getting his puppy today, and I am getting a sister! Her birthday is in a week, ...

I liked it alot! Keep writing!

I like it! I can't wait to hear more about this character and their plans. -Titan

Congrats!

Hey! I'm not really good at this sort of story, so bear with me! I had to write this story for social studies, so the story may be a little ...

Hey! It's me again! The first part of the chapter confused me, with the little girl. Ialso noticed a few things. I was suddenly snapped out of my relaxed state, ...

Hey! I have no idea how much of the stuff I am going to say was already covered by anyone else, but I am going to say it anyway. “Aren’t ...

Hey! Again, I really like your writing! Only noticed one thing that bugged me. I did feel bad that I said no to his party now. It might just be ...