Titan4ever

Thank you guys for the reviews! I will take your ideas into consideration. Thanks again! -Titan

I've never really written a poem before, so I have no idea if I put this in the right place, or if it's any good. Constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks! ...

I liked it. It said to me that you can be anyone you want to be, and it doesn't matter what people think of you.

Going sledding on the Pennsylvania mountainside that my uncle owns is the highlight of my February break. We ride up the hill on the side of the mountain in the ...

Wow! It looks really good! I could never draw anything close to that!

Hey BugBug! I love this addition to the story. I hope you write more! -Titan

I loved it!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!!! -Titan

Oh my gosh! It's a great addition to the story! I'm keeping this review short and sweet so I can finish reading what you've written! So, It's great! -Titan

Hey! This part of the story kindof was confuzing. I noticed one spelling error. Being the nosey mermaid that I am%u2026Ok! Ok! So I%u2019m nosey !- It should be spelled ...

Hi! I really like it! It's a good start, and comparing to other reviews, I agree that it is like the little mermaid. It is just a little confuzing at ...

Wow. All I can say is Wow. It puts a definite twist into the story. It leaves the reader wondering if it really was a dream...

A great chapter! Mysterious. Exciting. I only saw one typo. It exited me, The word should be spelled excited. Overall, I really liked it. The plot is very exciting and ...

Hello! I really liked this chapter. although, it was a little confusing when they started fighting. i wouldn't recommend a he said/ she said thing though, so I don't know ...

are you like a professional or something? These pictures look really good!!! My favorite one is the second one, and I have no idea why. I think it's because of ...

I loved it! It's another great chapter to your work BugBug! I am determined to finish reading it and reviewing it today! Keep writing! -Titan4ever