Tigersprite

9/10 The hook is there, and strong. Your MC's cynicism works well as a descriptive tool, and apart from giving us a sense of place it also gives us a ...

"Don't leave me again," she says. He ignores her, puts on the heavy coat the same black as his eyes. "I swear to Jesus, you walk out that door you ...

I think the first of the second drafts looks slightly better than the other. Although, I forgot to mention last time: should "reviewed" be capitalized? It makes it seem like ...

The info is great, though you may want to mention something about it not being solely for writers, but for artists and singer/songwriters as well (though I guess that is ...

I honestly can't be bothered to post this officially. Nonetheless, I do like it. EDIT . Had to delete the poem, sorry.

Esione would plan on how to get back at the person who caused it, and then go after them when she recovered. What would your character do if someone close ...

Challenge One Tiger

Aiden (means fire and is unisex), Jamie, Alex, Ashley. They're all unisex, actually.

This is really great. Personally I usually suck at drawing with pens, I'm a pencil person. ;) The lips aren't really that bad. What I did notice though were how ...

This is really good, no wonder you won the contest! Congrats, by the way. :D The un-matching eyes are a little odd, but they're not that bad. If anything, the ...

Teenage girl drifting through high school unnoticed until she is asked out/ falls in love with hot new boy/ captain of the football team.

Three things: 1) A Tom and Jerry -esque comedy, 2) A jewel thief being pursued by cops and, 3) A timid person who's always running away from their problems.

These look incredibly...odd. Especially the flower one. But you say you did them both with a mouse? The second one looks really straight! Anyway, well done! I'm okay at drawing ...

As lilymoore said, it's your story and you can do as you like. One of the most important things when writing multiple POVs is having a good rhythm, to again ...

Aiden would probably go there once to see if there was anything good to steal. Mortimer just wouldn't turn up. And if they called round, he'd send them a letter ...