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Hey, Bean! I'm Tiger and I'll be your reviewer for today, as a judge in the contest. Right, so there are some good points to this. At the start, it ...

I think the first of the second drafts looks slightly better than the other. Although, I forgot to mention last time: should "reviewed" be capitalized? It makes it seem like ...

Poems don't need to rhyme at all; that's just the sort of poem they teach children in primary school because they're easier to understand. You've still written a poem, Jessa. ...

Hey Ty! Welcome to YWS; Tiger and I'll be your reviewer today! :) So, this is quite a beautiful piece. Beautiful in its descriptions, in the ranges of emotion displayed--especially ...

Zaria Janson~Upper East Side I didn't know what was happening. I'd kept quiet, so quiet that the others had barely noticed me. And then out of nowhere a vampire showed ...

Date : 13/4/11 Music : Short Change Hero --The Heavy Naked Gun At last, you let me touch the stone-set square of your jaw, my fingers run across the fine, ...

The info is great, though you may want to mention something about it not being solely for writers, but for artists and singer/songwriters as well (though I guess that is ...

Tiger here to review for the contest! First of all, the story concept was great. The idea of the alien race of Greyes and their monotonous life is quite interesting ...

Can you please review this ? It's a fantasy novel chapter. Thanks in advance! :) Tiger

Hey Pink! (How's the Penguin Club revival going?) Can you review this , please? It's the continuation of the series of short stories I first posted on YWS--The Spirit Boy. ...

Could you please review this , Rasca? Thanks in advance, Tiger

Hey Dreamwalker! I'd appreciate it if you could review Smoke and Fire: One , it's a fantasy novel chapter. Many thanks, Tiger

NOTE : For those of you who have read some of my earlier works, this is a continuation of The Spirit Boy. Thus you might notice some...discrepancies between what happened ...

And today, I attempt a Sijo, instead of writing a none-rhyming poem full of enjambment. It's pretty short. Date: 12/4/11 Music: None Sijo Where is it that I dance? In ...

This is a beautiful poem. From what I've read (after going over it twice ;)), a young woman has started life as a nomad, because she's running away from her ...