Tigersprite

First of all, you need to remember to leave space after a full stop and comma. Your writing was kind of all bunched together because of that. That day when ...

Makes no sense? This is your way of making sense of your frustration. It's funny and most teens on here can understand it completely. You're simply writing down what you ...

As TheTruthLiesWithin pointed out, this should be a Prologue, not a Prolougue. And: My leg stung as a particularly nasty barbed branch tore the flesh of my calf. The 'of' ...

I really like this poem, it's got a lot of feeling and emotions to it. And yet it's so short and simple. The only thing I have a little problem ...

DON’T CRY CHILD Don’t cry child, Don’t put up a wall. When you are feeling lonely, When they don’t answer your call. Don’t cry child, Don’t run away When they ...

ONE Her footsteps were heavy on the stairs. She came crashing into my room, a large doll in her right hand. She stood by my bedside, waiting for me to ...

I've read this through, and I am completely confused by the point of view. Not to mention how you throw in mysterious and completely unexplained comments: She was fierce, she ...

The opening, I will admit, drew me in. However, I began to get bored not soon after. CLICHES 1) The Female Protagonist being in love and wanting to go out ...

Hi Everyone. I'm new here, I decided to join after coming across this webiste two or three times, I'm already a member of another, slightly less professional online writing community. ...