Tigersprite

Beautiful. Although: Even these small temporary g moments of joy grow old and unsatisfying beyond the grasp of surprise. I think the 'g' there was a mistake. But this brief ...

FORCE OF HEAVEN, FORCE OF EARTH From Heaven unto Earth, Beautiful and deadly Never again to cause Pain, Fear, Misery Hope, Wonder on that place already touched. Bright like Father ...

Nice, simple poem. My only slight problem was the lack of capital letters at the start of the sentence, and I think heaven and hell should also have started in ...

Elizabeth Love layed on her bed looking up at her ceiling thinking about how crappy her life had gotten in the past 9 years, it had all started on her ...

I like this. It's the same vibe as that Sober song by Pink.

Beautiful. I found it difficult to understand at first, and I wasn't too sure about it, but the more I read the better it was. It’s a lie. What’s a ...

TWO I was not allowed to attend the funeral. I was too young, apparently, to say goodbye to the one who was far too young to die. I stayed in ...

So...Topaz and Emerald are talking, winged werewolves? I am a notice writer so I probably have quite a few grammar mistakes that I didn't see. This is the most romantic ...

I agree with Persephoneia; great imagery. Wondered why it was sixteen, and I still wonder, for the way you present the poem is not explicit at all, it's beautiful. Great ...

This is the kind of poem that I don't understand. I got a general vibe of sadness, anger and pain (and of course loneliness), and it seems really emotional. From ...

Captured the mentality of an anorexic perfectly, but I agree with a few points made by sargsauce. And definitely, that 'Please' line is confusing. The story is good though. Is ...

THE WISDOM OF MR FOX One day, I met a fox Coming down the roadside He nodded in greeting and Turned to the thicket And I implored of him: ‘Mr ...

Thank you for the helpful reviews, because of them I'll make a few things a little clearer: Certain words are capitalized for emphasis, I've read the works of people like ...

I really enjoyed this, although, the tree snapping was very random. Still, a good story and I love how you posed the title.

The crocodile-man thing in Sims Urbz DS. Its eyes just really creeped me out. And also barbie dolls.