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I like this poem. I'm not sure what, but something made me want to read it and I wasn't disappointed. I also agree with the others, you could have added ...

Name: Aiden Omi Age: 14 Crime: Theft, Breaking and Entering. Appearance: 5"4, black, spiky hair, brown eyes, Eurasian ancestry (half-british, half-chinese). Slight, short build, a scar on the back of ...

Searching for agents, somehow came across it.

Fantastic imagery, and you have a way with words. I did find it a bit sad, but not in a bad way. This is my favourite stanza: I am ashamed ...

Well, it ends in a depressing manner. But it's a good poem, I like some of your descriptions: From green drenched Sunshine Into a drunken haze of amber Anyway, well ...

My name is Britney Courtney Angel and I have a secret: I'm a half-vampire half-angel, and I'm the only hope in the war between the vampires (one of which is ...

Really, really strange poem. But rather good for your first time; it's completely abstract. That's one good thing about trying out poetry, you can be as weird as you want ...

Cool. Personally, I think the last one looks like the Hyrule Castle in the Legend of Zelda series (come to think of it, all the drawings look similar to the ...

I like this! I haven't quite figured out yet who the beautiful girl in the sky is, but I will! My favourite line is definitely: But he looks down And ...

I like the smell of petrol (heavenly).

Thank God there are sensible people here. I was looking to point out the truth of the supposed Ground Zero Mosque but my fellow YWS members have already done it. ...

I wouldn't take it. Something we fail to realize is that we are humans, we get bored easily. If we take a happy pill, if it is continuous then we ...

1) Stop reading Twilight. It's rubbish anyway. 2) If you can make your characters have distinct and unique personalities, and you have an original storyline, then you have absolutely nothing ...

Just refer to her as a female, otherwise the readers will get confused. As Lauren2010 said, just make sure to clearly show whether characters know she is female or not ...

This is one of the funniest poems I've read to date. However, it wouldn't make me go out with anyone, the girl really must have been a nerd. As stargazer9927 ...