Tigersprite

If you want to make a character annoying, model them after Spongebob Squarepants, or yes, a Disney character. :) TIGERSPRITE

There are tons of good writers out there, who I think go unappreciated. Even though you may vote for them, and even follow them, others won't even read there work. ...

Aiden Omi--8:40--Girl's Breakfast Hall I looked around, but it was only some nameless person passing by. Already distracted from the food I didn't want to eat, I watched the other ...

There are five different POVs in my book, and I quite like them. All the characters are different and need to express themselves in different ways. If you have characters ...

Eragon (and two following books). Sweet. And a more recently read book about a lawyer being accused of murduring his former lover, which he didn't do. Innocent Unit Guilty, or ...

There is a particular road in Festac, a peculiar road in Festac. It is called Third Avenue. It is divided into three lanes, the peculiar one being the one in ...

Aiden Omi/ 7:50 am/ Girls Breakfast Hall I walked as slowly as a possibly could, to the one of the spare tables. I saw a few girls look up as ...

FOUR I stood on the same path, and I was aware that Katsa was a little way behind me; we were still in the middle of the valley forest. But ...

As Mizzle pointed out, this is a tongue-twister, not poetry. And please try and follow the guideline while posting--Please use good grammar. Posting in caps is not good grammar. Next ...

Thanks for all the comments guys, this was the second poem I ever wrote after Don't Cry Child (which based on comments, isn't quite as good as this one). Thanks, ...

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Fix the title, it's a really incredibly long story but it is rather interesting. It's too long for me to review, because I'd have to read it twice and I ...

This is an incredibly powerful and well-written piece. The best part for me was the last stanza: Now I want to be healthy But I'm going to need some help ...

Good poem, I like the repetition: How could you? The only small nitpicks I have are in the third stanza: How could you? Create such hurtful lies And take away ...

THREE We stood in the mouth of a valley. The land sloped down steeply, and woodland lined both sides of our path. The bear who I assumed was Katsa, the ...