Tigersprite

Nice, heartfelt poem. Depression is a strong theme here, with an undertone of anger. The whole thing has a sort of beautiful melancholy to it, you know? My favourite lines ...

NOTE : Perhaps you should capitalize the title. remember when, you held my hand. you whispered in my ear, you said you loved me. remember when, you left me in ...

Hey Skins! Thanks again for the previous reviews, do you think you could review this contest entry: Thanks in advance! TIGERSPRITE

I do like it, I like the rhyming (call me childish but I love poems that rhyme). One nitpick though is: The very fabrics of my soul fell apart, As ...

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Shouldn't this be in the poem area?

Shaddowsoldier, I still don't think you're listening. Before you follow this up (which I advise you not to) you need to show us a revised version so that we know ...

Can you please review this: Thanks in advance, TIGERSPRITE

Do you think you could take a look at this Retro? : Thanks in advance, TIGERSPRITE

Welcome to YWS! Harry Potter, eh? It was my favourite series as a young child. Actually, me and some other children actually reviewed it for a newspaper! I still have ...

Note: Just to save you the trouble of figuring it out yourself, after each distinct break the story is written from a different character's point of view. Also, the italics ...

Probably many people believe that the city where they live is boring, 'cause they see it every day. That is very true. Now that I've moved I'll probably take this ...

TIGERSPRITE originated as a username for a PC game. I liked it so much I began using it for pretty much everything. P.S. I didn't know you changed your name, ...

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Welcome to YWS! You seem very interesting, SofiaDesu.You said it's your dream to live in London? Trust me, it's really very boring. I used to live there myself. Maybe it's ...