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First things first and not about the review, but I COMPLETELY forgot about this contest! Dang. I'm going to have to PM retro with an apology. Anyway great poem, to ...

...Well, welcome I suppose (nearly a year too late). You must be really bored. Hmm. This isn't much of a greeting, I can't take it seriously yet. Give me a ...

Camden Town, eh? I've never been there exactly, but I have been to Brent Cross nearby (then again, so has everyone in the area with an Oyster and ten pounds ...

Congrats!

Oh man! Everyone beat me to it! Ah well! Welcome to YWS, londoncalling! I used to live in London myself, in Finchley actually (MUAHAHA, we know where that is and ...

Mortimer Geology bored me. It wasn't that I was bad at it, but it merely bored me. Bored the life out of me. Why did I have to learn about ...

Where is the school based? I need to know for my character's history classes.

Because there's a dent in his brain. Why is there a dent in his brain?

Torrent, Day? What does that mean?

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Hi Kimberleigh! You live in England? Me too! Reading! Writing! Drawing! Those are my favourite things too! You're doing NaNoWriMo? You sound really prepared for it, would you believe that ...

Aiden Omi Something hit me on the side of the head. I knew only Kisa would throw it, but when I looked round at her she gave me such a ...

Mortimer Of course it would be Patch first to ruin everything. I told him quite clearly to go away, but if he heard me he didn't show it. Then Kolbey ...

Yay! You put them both up! Of course, I've already done my reviewing. But I mentioned that you made a few mistakes in the last few paragraphs, and I'll point ...

Alright, Tiger here to review. I know the order of the day is a Critique Sandwich, but I prefer a Critique Spread. :D So, to the nitpicks first! . The ...