Tigersprite

Present The coffee shop, Esnatzen, was empty when Seres walked in; the moss green carpet shocking his feet. Can a carpet shock someone's feet? Did you mean that it felt ...

Sorry about the lateness, like borntobeawriter I am a follower of your novel come to review! :D This chapter is as long as the first, and I can see that ...

Wow, both Idraax and Rach stole my thunder. But oh well. Welcome to YWS, PaperCrane! That's a really cool name by the way. :D You want to post your stories ...

Congrats everyone! :D

The shambler gently rocked, almost lulling me to sleep, but the knowledge of my arrival to the cliff town of Spondekai I'll admit this has nothing to do with the ...

I'm sorry guys, but I need to drop this storybook. I don't have the time what with NaNo and editing my book before sending it to an agent and school. ...

Lumi called out all the nitpicks, so I'll get straight to talking about the poem itself. It's deep. Strong themes of depression, exhaustion, the narrator has given in. It sounds ...

How to make characters flow? Write about them. Get to know them like you know anybody else, you have to know them because only through you can anyone else get ...

Hey Rustyknives, welcome to YWS! :D Were you asked to join by a friend who is already a member? Why was that? Do you like to write, or do you ...

These are really good! :D I like the second one best, where that sparrow is looking up (I wonder what it's looking at?). They all look like little chicks, actually. ...

Option two, the dark fantasy story. It sounds far more interesting and less over-done than the zombie story.

You're a Brit too? Interesting. I like Halo, Left 4 Dead and occassionally Call of Duty, although I'm STRONGLY opposed to Modern Warfare 2. Bad experience with Modern Warfare 2, ...

Welcome to YWS, GypsyPrincess.Stupid? Have you seen the names around here? (My own for instance?) I'm sure you'll like it here, it's one huge family really. Don't be afraid to ...

The three of the top of my head are: The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho, The Famished Road by Ben Okri and the Tales of the Otori series by Lian Hearn/ ...

Oh right. Nearly two years too late.