Tigersprite

This awesome! It helped me see quite a few things in my book that I need to go over! :D

Hi fellow YWSers! RAWR! I've been wondering whether to start a Will Review For Food Thread, and I've finally decided to! So I'll just tell you what I will and ...

Mortimer Mr. Griffin barked at us, dividing us into pairs of two. I liked Gym. It was a chance to practice my hand-to-hand combat, and whenever Mr. Griffin turned a ...

Aiden would probably go there once to see if there was anything good to steal. Mortimer just wouldn't turn up. And if they called round, he'd send them a letter ...

Hello, my name is Mortimer, and to be very honest I don't like people much.

This please Skins! Thanks in advance! :smt003

You can review this whenever you have the time because of NaNo: But if you don't...TIGER NINJAS! TIGERSPRITE

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Oh sure. I don't think I've seen you around before, but here's something to review anyway. Can you please review The Ghostmaster at: Thanks in advance, TIGERSPRITE

Welcome to YWS, ongoeslife! (Interesting name by the way. Reminds me of a movie where a guy is just casually walking along a road and gets shot, then when the ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! At first I wondered what you meant about the MC thing, then I read it through and realized what you meant. The problem is that ...

Ebony skin In ivory halls. White dusty faces. Hope aganist against all odds. Sweet, sweet surrender, in bloody walls. Fight for freedom, or nothing at all. Yellow stars, in scarlet ...

This looks pretty good! :D It looks quiet realistic actually. Now all you need is a guy in a Jedi outfit with a lightsaber. Then it'll look just like a ...

NOTE: Hope you guys don't mind, but like Kiss of Death 's prologue, I really just want to post this to see what you think of the style and whether ...

Sorry about the late review, I kept reading it through then going to write the next chapter of my novel before I reviewed. Anyway, I'm here now. :) Why won't ...