Tigersprite

Very rural, though apparently this is changing more. Yes it is changing, and it's not so rural anymore. That isn't to say that villages don't exist, but then they're like ...

All done Persephoneia! Anyone else?

Tiger here to review per request. Comments will be in bold . The cold woke my lukewarm body, set my heart pounding and my organs quivering; Maybe you should put ...

Aiden Omi I stretched myself out on the lower bunk and sighed. I hated being cooped up in this cell. The small size. The rank smell of the mattresses I ...

All done Silent! Great poem by the way! ;) Anyone else?

Tiger here to review per request. Comments will be in bold , and because this is poetry most of them will be just that: comments. Not necessarily corrections. Dark, dark, ...

All done Pinkangel!

Alright, Tiger here to review per request! Comments will be in bold . 1. Reunion The woman was close; Asha could feel it. Finally. She had been searching for almost ...

All done Narnia! :D Anyone else?

Tiger here to review per request! First of all, let's get down to the nitpicks/ corrections/ mistakes (whatever you prefer to call it, really). “It’s the last day of school, ...

All done Pink! And I don't think you should change the title, it suits the poem just fine. ;)

When the moon is bigger than the sun, A noise will whisper in your ear, I like these first two lines. I really like these first two lines. A shadow ...

All done aweqz!

Right, this is Tiger here to review; comments will be in bold. Foretold PART ONE Prolouge Before we even get into the story, this should be 'Prologue', for there isn't ...

Okay, could I have a link please?