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Re: Common Cliches?
Teenage girl drifting through high school unnoticed until she is asked out/ falls in love with hot new boy/ captain of the football team.
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Title, anyone?
Three things: 1) A Tom and Jerry -esque comedy, 2) A jewel thief being pursued by cops and, 3) A timid person who's always running away from their problems.
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Fading Promises ~A Princess Tutu Fanfiction Piece~
Okay, so this is my first piece in like...months. On top of that it's rather rushed, so I'm kind of scared that it's really horrible. Heh. Anyway, the inspiration came ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)
Done Persephoneia! Getting to yours now Jash!
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Bouquet of Bruises
Scarlet petals leaked from her skin, danced I think dancing might go better here between torn pores to the cruel world above, . rose perfume Switching these words around might ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: To all my best friends on YWS.
This is awesome! :smt003 Pink's given you one, but I'll still give you another penguin!
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
'Kay, Tiger back to review. It took me a while to find this Part 2. But now I have and I'll give you another review! :D There was a long ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
When I was seven, a friend of my mothers asked if I could be a flower girl in her wedding. I said no, because I didn't want to wear a ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: What are you eating?
Some tasty lamb! ;)
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Sex In Books (Opinion)
The essay is strong and passionate, and the fact that you are a teenager saying this gives it a valid presence. If anything, maybe you can add another more popular ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: The Last Day
Thanks for all the reviews guys! :D I'm trying to implement some of your comments and ideas now. I will win this competition yet! :p
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
9/10. Haven't heard of the song (it's a song right?) but I like it. First line especially.
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: One Day I Fell Asleep, And I Never Woke Up.
Can I reserve a spot for a Male?
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011
I've decided, I shall submit a short story and a poem. I can't wait! :D
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: The Last Day
@ leebass It is quite depressing isn't it? Actually this is the most depressing thing I've written. It was going to have a happy ending at first, but then I ...
Nov 21, 2010
