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Laridail--Ziras Fields The first party has begun to ascend the hill. Laridail wondered if any of them suspected that he had Scribed their thoughts. But even if they did, they ...

Bartholomew Matthews/ Soul Catcher/ Sq. 741 I watched Amy leave after that skinny guy with the messy hair tried to stop her. My curiosity was aroused, but I managed to ...

Tiger here to review Skeensy (yeah, I think I might call you that for a while ;)). As always comments will be in bold and I'll be using that format ...

Done Vampyre! Amazing poem, by the way.

So this is Tiger here to review, and don't worry, it won't be harsh. Because there's nothing to criticize really. Well, I've read it. And I've read the spoiler too. ...

Thanks for all the helpful reviews guys. Now I've got some important feedback: try and make the sentences less choppy and more descriptive, and try to make sure I don't ...

Done all except Vampyre. I'll try and get to yours now.

Alright boss, Tiger here to review. Comments shall be in bold, longer, detailed comments will be outside the quote box. The creation In this time, there was nothing. This first ...

Name: Rayne Sarah Age: 18 Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: She's friendly and outgoing, talking to everyone and anyone. She can actually be quite irritating at times, because even when things ...

Your review for The Last Day was awesome, so here I am to ask for another. Can you please review the Prologue of my novel? It's a revised version of ...

Hey Tanya! Did I tell you about that story I was rewriting...well, I've put the Prologue up for some criticism. Your reviewing would be much appreciated! :D Tiger

Hey Skinsy! Now I need some of your reviewing expertise. :D Can you review the Prologue of Rebirth? I need some feedback so that I know it's okay. It's pretty ...

NOTE: This is the revised prologue to my first complete novel, Rebirth. I'm in the process of rewriting the entire thing, so any comments you have on improvements to this ...

You forgot a few. ;) - You're a Depp fan. - You're an awesome, supportive, loving friend. - You're a great writer. :D Je t'aime, ma mere! Seconded. :3 I ...

Aikan Dursil--Party One People started to leave after Laridail's announcement. Those without the courage that the quest required, and those that didn't believe the evidence he had given. And of ...