Tigersprite

NOTE: Though you won't be in party two for long, after this post all original party two members please put the words next to your character's name anyway. Prince Laridail--Ziras ...

I'm late to review this, so my apologies. I won't point out typos per the request, so I'll just focus on the nitpicking. She just stared at the twitching blob ...

--Rewrite Rebirth, implementing the writing style I didn't have when I wrote it the first time, and everything I've learned about writing since. Attempt to complete this before my birthday. ...

Prince Laridail--Ziras Fields He watched the sun rise steadily, until it was a considerable height in the sky. The first party would be out of Adiel and on their way ...

Done Canis! Anyone else?

Hey Canis! Tiger here to review per request. Comments will be in bold within quotes, longer, more detailed or more important comments will be outside the quotes. My name is ...

@ballerina13 Thanks for the input, yes it is based on the Pocahontas song. I've added some commas and a few question marks to make it easier to read now. @Pink ...

Hey Draax! Can you please review this ? It's for a contest, so thanks in advance! :D Tiger

Hey justbeingme! Welcome to YWS! Don't worry, you are definitely going to love this site. :D And yes, Nate, the site Admin, is totally awesome. It's not easy to create ...

Hey Skeensy. Yup, I'm back again. :P Can you review this for me? It's a contest entry (not yours, though ;)), so I need some serious critiquing so that it's ...

Have I asked for a review here before? My memory is bad. Anyway: Can you please review this poem for me Pink? It's for a contest, so I need some ...

NOTE: This is for Elinor Brynn's Disney Songs contest, the details of which can be found here . It is based on Colours of the Wind from Pocahontas . And ...

Sorry for going slightly off-topic, but I have an issue about this: Also, many races get mad when you call them by a similar race, like if you called a ...

R-Ratatouille.

Everyone and by everyone i mean everyone who recognizes the difference between races is racist. Simply because they recognize the difference in race makes you racist. Simple fact. Everyone makes ...