Tigersprite

Done Dreamy!

Tiger here to review per request. Now I won't quote the whole thing, seeing as there're only two nitpicks I have here: Mentioned briefly, tempers fizz Fire for the olive ...

Challenge One Tiger

Carry on with the outline. I had the same problem, and I advise you to have a basic outline before you start writing. That way, even if you write and ...

Aikan Dursil--Party One The sun was clear in the sky, but as usual for this part of the world, it wasn't warm anyway. I shivered as the seven of us ...

Done Sephy! Now just yours Psudiname.

Hey Sephy, I'm finally here to review. And I must apologize for my laziness. Let's get down to business, shall we? As ever, comments will be in bold . rattles ...

Aiden (means fire and is unisex), Jamie, Alex, Ashley. They're all unisex, actually.

Done Weaver! Getting to the rest tomorrow!

Tiger here to review per request (though next time can you please provide me with a link? It's a lot faster than digging in your portfolio ;)). Comments shall be ...

Does anything meaningful happen in your prologue? Nothing "big" needs to happen, but something must happen or be shown that will be meaningful later in the story. Otherwise there isn't ...

9/10 It probably has some sort-of poetic meaning, but wouldn't an angel scheming wickedly be called a demon?

5/10, it's...weird. And yes Hawk, the tiger is underwater. And I could not, for the life of me, tell you why. But it makes it look good anyway. ;)

...I was laughing as I was reading. This was so...bad. :P And so hilarious. And then so bad. And then so hilarious again. What with the semi-muscular, not muscular thing, ...

10/10 because I'm a Power Rangers fan. :D