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Re: Tarzan Boy, Chapter 2
This is great, your writing is so easy to read. Juniper pretty much said it all, i think, you have a great writing style, and you got the female persepective ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Tarzan Boy Chapter 1
Love it, its absolutely marvelous. Others have said exactly what i would have, and im going to read the next peice now!
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: No title (suggestions welcome)
Lovely! All of the minor mistakes have been pointed out already, so i won't bother with it, will be waiting for the next one because this seems like it will ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: SHORT STORY
WOW. I am simply speechless. It's late, and I can't really think, and since I am new i don't know how to do a nit-picky thing, I just want to ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: TigerGate, chapter 1
Once again, it's a draft, and is in no way perfect! Chapter One Alicia sat beside her open window reading a book for school. Jane Eyre, it was called, and ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: TigerGate
Thank you!! These make me happy, I didn't think anyone would like it. I will post Chapter one now!!
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: .:Second Nature:.
I really liked this, honestly i don't understand why everyone is making a big deal. It drew me in, and though it wasn't completely explained, i really enjoyed it, it ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: TigerGate
So this is my book that i have been working on, called TigerGate. This is just the prologue. I figured i could put it on here, couldn't hurt anything. Keep ...
Nov 22, 2009
