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Re: Dark
Welcome to YWS by the way!! :D
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Dark
Wow. Dark, suspensful, good meter and rhyme. Utterly riveting, I love it! You are very good! Keep writing! ~Shaard
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (13)
The more i read, the more i love this story. Im utterly obsessed with it. You are wonderful. ~Shaard
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: A feast fitting for a wolf. (Historical Horror.) Part 2.
Wow, this is awesome once again. Poor girl, I feel bad for them. I was totally engrossed, so I didn't notice any mistakes in grammar or anything.I'm sure the others ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (16)
Oooo, this is very good, if you have more I would like to see it. It drew me in, I was curious the whole time. You are a good writer. ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Circle of Seasons, Prologue
Thank you! I have been a bit unsure about these books, you are right, there are elements coming into play, I just have no idea how to start the dang ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: You Soft and Lonely/You Lost and Lonely III
Wow, this story is getting good! Looks like Roon got all of the places that need some help. Also, it looks like this is kind of old. But I like ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Greensleeves
Wooo! This is good! I hope you win!
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Mourning
This is...interesting...I don't really understand what was going on, but I think it has some potential... Keep working at it! ~Shaard
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Dear Daisy
Awww, I almost started crying, they are sitting in my eyes as I type this. What can I say? That was incredible. A few grammatical mistakes, a few things you ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: A feast fitting for a wolf. (Historical Horror.) Part 1.
I like this, its very good. Stella covered it all I think, PM me when you get part 2 up, I'm interested to see how you will continue this. Bad ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Paper Piano-Chap. Two
Aww, this made me sad :( It's a cute story, and I didn't really expect the fight, but then, I guess thats why I liked it lol. They pretty much ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Circle of Seasons, Prologue
One of my books I'm working on, this one is called Circle of Seasons, Autumns Passing. I haven't really written much of it, this is all I have so far, ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: TigerGate, chapter 1
Thank you so much JP, you were a big help as well! I'm glad you guys like it, and I hope it wasn't too confusing how I jumped from Shaari ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: TigerGate, chapter 1
Thanks Seraph, I was thinking it sounded a bit rushed to me, stupid drafts always make me feel like an idiot LOL. You guys rock, thank you so much! I'm ...
Nov 22, 2009
