TigerShaard

Sooo, Spiral strikes again. The only thing I caught was "hopeles" should be "hopeless" Use your spell check girl! All in all, it did draw me in, and I can't ...

Thank you Forest, your the best

This is a really, really interesting story. Im not even going to attempt one of those fancy reviews, just PM me when the next peice is out :p

Make them longer!! I can't stand the wait in between one and the other.

Please please please post more! Its so awesome, i just want to read more!

Interesting... It definitely has potential, when I picked up on the fact that it was a vampire story, I got a little hesitant, but all in all its really interesting. ...

Woot! This rocks! I'm interested to see where this is going, please PM me when you have the next piece out, I already love this story. ~Shaard

Wow...I really really liked this. Its deep, and i can feel the vibes coming off it. Good job! ~Shaard

Wow...amazing...

To the day in the night When a heart beats in fright And you lay down your head Nuzzle the pillow on your bed You could, you would... How you ...

I liked this when it was one line in a chat a looong time ago, it's ten times better now. Your poetry speaks, it tells its own story. Keep writing, ...

Hey Spiral! As usual, magnificent. Poems don't need description, it could be a jumble of words, as long as it means something. I love it, its truly remarkable, and seems ...

Hey Forest! This piece is cute...but it doesn't seem to be going anywhere. I was interested about it at first, wondering what was gonna happen, but it soon got a ...

Thank you Forest, I promise I will keep you updated! Thank you so much! ~Shaard

So here is Chapter Two, worked on it abit. Right now, I am writing to get the story out, not paying so much attention to grammar and wording. Anyways, nit ...