TigerShaard

Ah yes, Spiral strikes again. Hmm, lets see, where to begin... So this is interesting, as usual, but it is a bit...bland...seems like it was one of those things you ...

Sudden brain blast, lemme know what you think! ~.~.~ We didn't want this to happen. We do care, despite our reputations. But this was something we did not foresee, we ...

Thank you. I'll take that into consideration...

More more more! Haha, I really liked this, it was humorous and suspensful. The others got everything I think. Keep working on this too, it really is a great read, ...

This is fantastic! I love reading Cinderella stories, especially ones that change it up and tell it from different perspectives and in different ways. Very nice job, and I didn't ...

Thank you Twilight, I'm glad you enjoyed it...

First Off, Welcome to YWS! You seem like you will be a good addition to the community. Second off, I love this. There are a few grammatical errors, and definitely ...

Thank you Kamas! Yes, I like that, I think I'll change it to and instead of the dash. Elena, Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Very nice! I wish there were more too it!

OMG! This is freakin awesome! Didn't catch many nitpicks, your grammar and spelling seem pretty good, and I love your writing style. It flows, and draws me in. Please post ...

You know how much I love this story, my dear friend! You shouldn't break it up! But it is your choice. I didn't catch any nitpicks, though im sure the ...

Thank you Spiral!

In the time before The world turned bleak When the fields of gold Were patched with trees I found my love Eyes black and wide, A raven haired beauty We ...

The way this flows is interesting. I haven't ever seen you write this way Spiral, totally new and original. Maybe not for you, but for me it is. Anyways, I ...

When I saw that this was long, I instantly wanted to read it. I read fast, and I like things that can keep me occupied. This was fantastic. I was ...