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Re: What do you look for in a potential girlfriend/boyfriend?
haha, I am so completely too picky. For a fourteen year old, I have extremely high standards. But! It happens to only work for each particular KIND of guy. I ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: First Blush: Prologue
First, Welcome to YWS!! It's always fun to have new members. Now, this is a very interesting piece, very good for a first post really. You made a few spelling ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Sands of Time [1]
Awww thank you guys : ) You are the best.
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [4]
Unlike Captain Classy up there, I think they could both like her. Cliche does not bug me, I like seeing the different ways they turn up. Anyways, I'm getting really ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Sands of Time [1]
Lol, thank you Snoink, I try to avoid cliches at all costs, so if I use them, its only because I have something super different planned. Anyways, thank you bunches ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: Sands of Time [1]
Hey ya'll! This is Sands of Time, I am trying a different style of writing for me, several different viewpoints and what not. Anyways, please help me correct errors, and ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: The Curse Beset on Me - short story
awwww....gold star for making me sad : )
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: Mythical Idiots
You always write such lovely pieces Sela. I really liked this, its beyond interesting and really drew me in. I like how you portrayed the werewolf and the vampire, it ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Circle of Seasons, Prologue
Maddy- Wow, Awesome idea! I think I will use that, instead of what I rewrote. Sounds like it would work better. Thank you!
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Circle of Seasons, Prologue
Thank you Lauren, I felt that it was a bit off, I just wanted to get across what she looked like, lol. But yes, I have rewritten this chapter, I ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: BloodLust - Chapter 2, Part 1
Hey Firestalker! I have read all your posts so far, and honestly, I really do like this story. Such a refreshing viewpoint after Twilight. I caught one thing, in the ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
I suppose I could be called a 'newbie' as I only joined a little over a month ago. But I have to say, I love YWS! I have gotten most ...
Dec 18, 2009 -
Re: Gods Of Fate- Prologue
Thanks guys, It makes me happy to read that people like my writing. : ) I will have the next piece out soon for you all to see! Thank you, ...
Dec 18, 2009 -
Re: MoonStrike: Chapter 1 (Revised)
Lol, I love it Spiral. I'm not going to attempt a nit-picky review, its nearly four in the morning and I am zoned out, all I want to say is ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Gods Of Fate- Prologue
Thank you all! I think it will be cool to write, and Bex, I promise it won't be cliche, no powers here : ) Anyways, I'll get started on it, ...
Dec 11, 2009
