TigerShaard

I liked this, simple as it was. Like Griffinkeeper said above me, the order could be changed. Oh and this bit I had a slight problem with: "In one graceful, ...

Hahahaha, I had a huge smile on my face the whole time I was reading this. Love it! lol ~Shaard

Thank you! Grr, I stared at it for hours and was just like "Ya know what, Imma ask YWS." Lol, thanks so much.

I like it, it has a truth to it. The rhythm seems a bit broken, but I think you were going for it. When I read it aloud it has ...

Haha, I like this. It made me smile after an exceptionally bad night. Thank you : )

Note: This is...unfinished...I believe, I'd like it to be longer. But tell me if you guys think it should be, it would help me a ton. Edit: Fixed the lines ...

This is...amazing...I've read all your chapters in fifteen minutes, and if I don't get more soon I might die! Please please PLEASE lol. This is coming along nicely. I love ...

This was amazing!! Seriously, I have nothing bad to say. I just wanted to tell you, it really is awesome. Keep writing! ~Shaard

Gotta say, I love horses! This had me hooked fast. Looks like they all got all the nitpicks...sadly, I gotta log on here more often. It was a bit fast, ...

I've just got to say it, I really enjoyed this. It was original, you had a great flow going, and I was giggling half the time. The scene you portrayed ...

Yay, its another one! I loved the kiss, it was cute...and then the similar thing...totally unexpected. Haha, I love this story. Can't wait for the next piece, it honestly kills ...

I just gotta say...this was simply amazing. I was hooked the whole time, I've have never read anything quite like it. I like your creativeness, and that was definitely unusual. ...

Yay! Another chapter. Writing can't always be fighting and action, sometimes you have to put the normal things in too. Some people get all mad when a chapter isn't like ...

Haha, I love Warriors, and this looks cool!

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