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Re: Bodies
I always love your poems so much, they're always so beautifully written..I really loved the first stanza, but then all the rest of it as well for your wordplay. Bravo ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: A Poem For the Girl
I loved this! The only nitpicks I have is, as the girl above me said, the line does make her sound a bit self-centered upon first reading. in the seventh...stanza?...'your' ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Mother
The rhyming was good and easy to read, with a fantastic flow to it. The only problem, though it isn't really a problem, is that it doesn't explain anything really. ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Suicide's Son
Hey Matt, I really liked this, especially the emotion. Whenever I read your poems, I get this sense of someone sculpting, steadily building up this fantastic work of art. Or ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Through It All
Wow, so first of all I have to say i REALLY like this. Second, I was confused by the random references to a Yuui? Not sure what that was about, ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Bubbling Light
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Sort of just a get-back-in-the-groove thing...Thanks again!
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: I have darkness in my veins.
The emotion in this piece...It's incredible. Very easy to understand, clear tone and even though it's rather depressing, the power of the desperation is touching... I really enjoyed reading this, ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Bubbling Light
So I have absolutely no idea where to put this, but Other is always a good place to go. When in doubt, post to Other. Hah. Well lemme know what ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Sirens' Songs
Honestly, I think this was wonderful. I got that feeling of reading an old masters poetry, if that makes any sense. I like the "(of time)" that the person above ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Rain, Summer, and Ice Cream: Chapter Seven
This story is just so awesome, i love the way you've built up the characters. They all have their own adorable personalities. I can't really offer a review right now, ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Colors of my world
Though it is short, It's powerful. I would have liked it longer, but hey, I write poetry and I know how it gets. For something thrown quickly together, I really ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Azaleas for Susie
I just have to say, wow. Five trillion times wow. This literally made me cry, thats how moving it was. I've got two younger sisters, but I remember when the ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Escapees (Splash of Color)
Aw, I really like this. Is there more, or is this simply a short story type of thing? I would definitely read more if there was any, haha. Anyways, I ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Wings - Chapter Two (Carly)
Oh man, You must PM me when you post more. This is the best thing I've read on here in a while, and I loved it! I read the whole ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Rain, Summer, and Ice Cream: Chapter Six
I just gotta say, I'm loving this little story you got goin on. It's funny, and it holds my attention. I don't really have a review, you're very good at ...
May 21, 2010
