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Re: All That's Left Of Him
Hey! I'm Thriller! How are you? I thought this was very, very good. I love the whole 'only dialog' thing. It makes everything a much smoother and quicker read. As ...
Aug 26, 2008 -
Re: The Man in Black and silver
Hello! This is my first critique, so bear with me while I get the hang of things here. Pebbles and small clumps of earth spewed from beneath the thundering hooves ...
Aug 26, 2008