Threnody

Melanie~ I followed Nicole's finger and saw the pleasant town. We had never been out like this and it felt so good. "But where are we going to go? We ...

Hello! It's nice to meet you! I hope you're having fun. Yes this site is a bit confusing. Check out the Help and Support for help and support. I'm Coralie ...

Try out: It's served me well. Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

Name: Caroline Kersey Age: 25 Appearance: Shoulder length thick wavy red/gold hair, elegant features, an imposing stance, deep clear green blue eyes, and a light tall build. Personality: Stubborn and ...

She could be Melpomene! The muse of tragedy. :cry: You could really play with her skills and stuff. And I love it how you consult us about these things. Peace, ...

Yours is better. Bettina~ Adrianna followed Emily out. It seemed to be the nicest gesture she made for anyone. Kyle looked at me and motioned for me to follow them. ...

Sabine~ I looked out to where Emily had ran. People had stood up to retrieve her. "Don't," the high melodic voice of Bettina said, "Let her cool down." We trusted ...

Sabine~ Stopping the new arrival seemed nearly impossible. He was powerful, it seemed, more so than us at least. I could keep track of him through the earth as he ...

Nice beginning. But this wouldn't really be the place to put it. I understand your motives but look at the other storybooks. Also read some of the storybook rules and ...

Wonderful poem. I liked the entire concept! (I would, mind you) One problem- some of the rhymes are too forced. Like see and tree. You should make that flow smoother ...

Oh my! This overall was a very beautiful poem! I loved it so much! It's got rhythm and it flows beautifully! The rhyme scheme works fine, don't worry. It gives ...

Hello Julian or Nai or Nai-Xi~ (Which do you prefer?) I'm Coralie, or Thren or Forever or Forever Threnody, (You may call me any one of those name as I ...

Hello Zyth! Are you enjoying YWS? I hope so. Singapore... nice sounding place. So, what do you enjoy writing? I write poetry. Honestly, trust me, don't look at any of ...

Bettina~ Adrianna stalked over to a rock and sat down to mope. Her hair hid her face but I could tell she was crying. I watched her through a fern ...

Sabine~ I liked the air. It felt nice being outside with the trees as our guardian. It wasn't cold out here. I decided it was perfect. I looked down at ...