Threnody

You could have jumped in at my post...

Bettina~Somewhere I wandered down the hall, talking to my doll. I was the youngest one here, but that never swayed me. "Astrid Wilhelmia Wyatt, how could you let your dress ...

Hello, Matt I was wondering if you wouldn't mind looking over these two poems and telling me what you think. Thanks so so so so so so much!!! We're so ...

Hi Princess, here's two poems I was wondering if you wouldn't mind looking over... We're so blind Coffee Thanks so so so so so much!! Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ ...

Hi, I'm back! I've got two more quite short poems I was wondering if you could look over. We're so blind Coffee Thank you sooooooooo much!!!!!! Peace, Love and Sugar ...

The eternity that is spent By looking at the world And feeling no forever Even though we know there is Seems too deep to know And the lifetime that we ...

Straight onto the objective... the story. I liked it a lot. It carried on a nice story. Here's some comments~ The Story- Overall: Very fast paced even for a short ...

You get a life. -insert coin-

Hello, just so you know, I've never played Halo and I don't know anything about it. Now here's my review. a heavy footprint and heavy breathing Heavy breathing doesn't seem ...

I'm sorry!! I can't post right now! I'm on a frantically reviewing so we can win the purple vs. blue competition... beep we rock, you know we do. as hard ...

Lovely poem. I think it captured a flight extremely well. Just a few comments in bold~ I took a trip today, A Journey above the clouds. Lumbering through the sky, ...

I would post but I can't at all this week as I'm trying to win a contest in which blue shall prevail. (huh? oh course. we rock, you know we ...

From your home you went into a hidden life with your new family of eight. Dread and terror never left your mind until that dreadful August day. When you were ...

Hello! About this poem... quite smooth and lovely. Here's my input. The corrections are in bold.~ His eyes are colorless, Like the sky when it threatens to rain, But then, ...

The moments are passing. The days are dwindling. I've lost who I'm being. I've forgotten who I'm becoming. The lies forever surround me. The false truth chokes like a weed. ...