Threnody

Hello Voice Inside. Nice to meet you! On to your poem~ An innocent thought; a hope to dream Life is for living and creating a scene Each moment you’re singing, ...

This poem had such deep meaning. You wrote it with a lot of feeling. Here's just a few nitpicks. Carry me; I want you to carry me on. Take me ...

Very good poem. It was so deep and flowed wonderfully. Honestly, there was nothing I thought you should change. Don't mess with perfection, no? I loved how the syllables kept ...

Don't worry Bolty, I'm perfectly fine with that. Interesting... I tried tennis and failed miserably in front of my friend who happens to be pretty good. I don't watch television ...

Name: Charlotte Natasha Habert Age: 15 Academy: Rave Position: Researcher/Spy Abilities/Strengths: Earth Manipulation. Weaknesses: She is quite reckless with her powers. Appearance: She has long, wavy

Wants to be a Rave spy! Save me a spot.

Hey Ergo! Nice to meet you! Now onto your poem~ I thought this poem was very beautiful, and definitely not your average love/yearning poem. I loved that! You used very ...

Hello, nice to meet you Serendipity! Now, onto the poem. Meet her Sweetheart. Knocking on a bit, but keeping her company; A gammy leg and flat cap - An old ...

Hi! Nice to meet you! Here's my comments, (some editing is in bold) The moon is shimmering The only light in the darkness Pain surrounds the Earth Sand washes up ...

I'm Forever Threnody! It's awesome to meet you! Well... looks like June covered most everything. Yes, this is probably the best place you could come to improve your writing skills! ...

My character shall actually be a hawk. I would like to keep it realistic enough... Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

*Dreamy voice* But it IS a real animal. Honestly though, want me to change it? Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

Profile: Name: Bettina Animal: Hawk. Color: Black with a blue tint. Other Appearance: She's about 15 hands high and very magnificent. Her wing span is enormous. Age: 17 Gender: Female ...

From out of the massive castle a huge voice rang that made everyone freeze in their tracks. "Please report to the first corridor in the castle, that you see to ...

Bettina~Corridor "Oh... well..." Somehow, a shy feeling came over me. I stood there looking awkward until a gruff looking teacher that had been sprinting down the hallway stopped at us. ...