Threnody

Why wouldn't you have to?

So you guys don't know everything, now don't you?

They are mean and ugly At least in my eyes Mine are lathered in the stuff That I call gross And disgusting But they like to call Lip-gloss Also, their ...

A guy with an electromotive force or potential difference expressed in volts. Or a person who doesn't know that boltage isn't a word. But also, when I see him, I ...

Hello tennis princess! Nice to meet you! Now onto your poem. Here's just some comments I've written. In bold. in sunlit shadow rooms, thinking well of you. Did I really ...

Here you go~ A fire made without coal. Try adding "the" in-between "without" and "coal." It's all for the sake of a consistent rhythm. This dreadful, devil madness. I think ...

All down the streets Brigitta dances, joyfully and nonchalantly to the sound of the cappella melody played by the Piper. Her feet move willingly but with somewhat masked force, like ...

Hello. I've been much anticipating this. Here are my comments~ (They're in bold) “Hey James.” I heard and turned to see Zeke at the door. Zeke was my best friend. ...

Profile~ Name: Brigitta Age: 15 Gender: Female Personality: Extremely defiant, stubborn, and frank. Won't do anything she doesn't want to do. She's very strong and witty and charismatic. She's a ...

Oh I absolutely adore this mermaid. In fact, most of your work, art I mean, has been my favourite I've seen in a while. Good job. The only slight problem ...

Okay, one I've got to say that I absolutely adore your avatar. It's my favourite I've seen in a while. Hilarious. Great prologue. I loved it so much. It really ...

Oh my gosh Thien. I hadn't read this poem yet. This is so gross and childish. But amusing in a way. Wow. What horrible thoughts go through your head? This ...

WriteWatIWant! I haven't reviewed anything of yours yet. Well, here goes. Should I write a love poem Since it's Saint Valentine's day? Should I propose to dance or to sing ...

Jok>>>>You live in London? Whoa. I live in the UK but not telling where. Not even implying it. Bolt>>>>I didn't get you favourite band yet.

Tomorrow doesn't matter 'cause we are caught in endless time. Lies that we tried to scatter aren't worth more than a dime. Okay, the last line seemed quite forced and ...