Threnody

Aren't you supposed to be smart?

When was the last time it wasn't?

Isn't that the word on the street?

Precious blackbird Sleep my baby blackbird, Sleep till the new dawn. I don't think "new" is necessary before "dawn." It definitely disrupts the flow. --- Otherwise, I think this poem ...

Hello WritewatIwant, here's your review. Corrections are in bold. You see darkness and regrets. Tears, both hers and yours. You're both battling, your inside wars. I like this first stanza. ...

Oh, how I dearly miss my maiden’s lips, So soft, perfect, I remember they were. Alice - she took my flowers in small sips Add a hyphen between Alice and ...

Hey Chartreuse! (I love that username!) *Ahem. Ruffles around "welcome" notes.* Welcome to YWS. Yes, I was one of the few people who didn't make their first debut in the ...

Hi Skydragoninventor!!!!! Welcome to the awesome place that we like to call the [s]asylum[/s] *cough* YWS! Just a few more rules... (bear with us please. It will definitely enhance your ...

Name (if you are not human, make a human name below): Jacquelyn Age (fifteen or over, please): 234 (which is young for a sorceress mind you.) Sex: Female Species: Sorceress ...

Cool! I haven't heard any of those songs... but maybe I will. Here's some of mine~ "I'm stubborn and wrong, but at least I know it." - Vanessa Carlton, Heroes ...

Hi Winter!! Could you please review this little poetry piece? Here: Threnody Thanks so much! Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

Hi Anzius. Can you please review this little poetry piece for me? Be as harsh as you find necessary. Here it is: Threnody Thank you so much! Peace, Love and ...

Hi Adnamarine! Could you please review this little poetry piece for me? Be as harsh as you find necessary. Here it is: Threnody Thank you so much! Peace, Love and ...

They'll try to tell you That what you saw Was just a nightmare But what would force you To wake up crying an ocean For the things you've seen Every ...

Okay, if you had to hear it playing 24/7 at full volume courtesy of your darling older brother... you'd hate it too.