Threnody

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Here's the review, and I think you're beautiful by the way, in your avatar. I picked up a magazine one day About as happy as i ...

Hi Dreamwalker! Can you please review this? It's a prologue to a fantasy story I'm just beginning. It's called the Piper. Here it is~ Thank you so much! Peace, Love ...

Hi Flutie! Here's a prologue to a fantasy story I'm just beginning. It's called the Piper. Can you pretty please review it? Okay... Here it is~ Thank you so much! ...

Well. I'll give you a shot. Hi ChasingColts! Nice to meet you. Here's a prologue to a fantasy story I'm just beginning. It's called the Piper. Here it is~ Thank ...

This baby I bestow upon thee, She will be your saving grace. From all the deity she is yours, Such a special gift is a rarity. • Okay. Good intro. ...

Hiding in the darkness From the evil one Here she comes around the corner I take off and run. • This entire stanza lacks iambic pentameter and a good syllable ...

Note to Self: Stop reaching for things impossible to grasp. Stop holding this stuff you’re unable to clasp. Stop climbing the ladder awaiting your fall. Stop looking for “Prince Charming”, ...

Actually, this seems to be doing good. We have 7 characters. We should wait until at least one person posts. And then we can begin. Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ ...

This poem was... spectacular. It's entire aura was that of something that could have very much came from the Shakespeare, the master himself. Old English does seem to be a ...

No, I meant a A Northern Light. Look it up. It's a good book. Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

9/10 Yes, I completely understand what you're talking about with the editor and such. And I have YWS. I like your first one, but it seems a bit cheesy.

Welcome Welcome!!! How are you liking this wonderful place? I sincerely hope you're having fun. I agree that writing helps the soul. I'd like to tell you some other awesome ...

Hi Chloe!! Or BlackSafetyPins (I love that username! Dunno why... It just sounds cool.) Welcome to the lovely place we like to call the [s]asylum[/s] *ahem* YWS! You bite... *shivers.* ...

...represents a time when you're not in contact with your family cause they don't have e-mail... ...when you have to put a password for your microwave...and silly things like that... ...

If I wanted to review this, should I review your original post or your second post? Um. I'll do second. -life is pain, pain is life. -but it can be ...