Threnody

I changed the gender of one of my characters. There weren't enough guys. And no, no surgery was necessary. Consider him a new being.

Done with both. Brilliant job guys! Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

This poem is particularly stunning. You're vocabulary shines and overall this poem is pretty perfected. Looks like your grammar has been cleaned up mostly, so here's just a few comments. ...

Again, I checked over the others grammar checks and they've covered all you need to fix. Here's just some basic thoughts I've had~ Inconsistent. The plot seems a bit choppy. ...

Here you are, as asked for. It seems as if people have beat me to the grammar issues, so I'll just tell you my overall thoughts about this~ Plot: The ...

Aren't you like... the creator of this?

It's not. It's easy to catch onto though.

Profile~ Name: Rachel Ellis Age: 13 Gender: Female Birthday: July 24th 1995 Personality: She's defiant, bold, and not one to follow rules. She is powerful and ambitious, and intimidating at ...

I love you, More than a match, Loves it's spark. • Yeah, you're just missing the "s" I adore you, More than a man, adore s his life. • The ...

Hello Spike!! It's nice to meet you. Haven't seen you around here, welcome to YWS. Here's your review. I love you, even more than me. I love you, Cant you ...

So, to answer questions, I play fullback. (defense) And Caroline, yes, same lady. A menace and disgrace to the world. Lot's of people play field hockey! That's awesome. Goal keeper ...

Many variables to consider here... Colour: Green. I like green! 3 points. Object: An eye. Hm. A dragon eye by the looks of it. Dragons are alright. 3 points. Overall ...

All very clever and fun. 9/10

That sounds interesting. I'd like to. So yes, if that's still available.

Felicity: Felicity wanders through the warm orange glow of the enormous ball room. The chandeliers hanging from the ceiling give the room an exquisite and delicate feeling, and one is ...