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Re: Children of Gods
Luke Gautier ~ Paris, France and headed to Manhattan. Luke wandered around a silent Paris. The wind stopped dead in it's tracks, a car frozen in motion and wine in ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Children of Gods
Luke Gautier really wants Kyle to be the guy he bestows his powers unto!!! :)
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Children of Gods
Character Profiles: God Name: Luke Gautier Apparent Age: 25 Gender: Male God of: Air, Change, and Emotion Powers: He can manipulate the air in many different ways. In the way ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Virals Rising (accepting characters!)
Angie "Gaia... ouch... God!!.... ow... damn... do not touch that part on my arm. It's not a big deal!" Gaia, one of the best healers in our compound, was the ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Virals Rising (accepting characters!)
Angie: "No, wait the virals are actually climbing up the ropes." Nick sighed. "I'm afraid to shoot, I might accidently hit one of them though..." I replied, I was dead ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Hiya! <3
Hey Shira Yurri! Welcome home :D . I totally get what you're saying though. Some story ideas I get just don't extend as far as chapt 2. I think you'll ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Spending the Rest of my life <3
This is a really sweet poem Remember!! And it's not bad, you're getting there! Here's just a few comments: I met you when I was to young to understand True ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: A Time, But No Place
Hey, not bad for a spur of the moment poem late at night. Late at night is when the best ideas flow. :D I hate it when people pick every ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Solitude and Smiles
Hey Perseph! This is a wonderful poem and I don't have very much negative things to say about it. (Read my other reviews... that's saying ALOT :D ) Anyway, if ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Virals Rising (accepting characters!)
Angie: Below the walls of of fortress night fell. It was dark when we spotted our first virals. They emerged from the trees, repelled but interested by our light. "Oh ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Virals Rising (accepting characters!)
Angie Talis: Four years ago, the only thing I cared about was getting the boy next to me to notice me. Four years ago, I was concerned about being the ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: To my dear "Friend" Writers Block *Way Edited*
Hey Rainy, this poems great... it made me smile reading it. Here's just a few comments: Dry spell, dry spell, go away! Don’t come back, any other day! • Nice ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Virals Rising (accepting characters!)
I read the book!! It's fabulous... :D I'm totally willing to start if that works with you guys. ~ Forever Threnody
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: The dog that never left his owner
Awwww..... poor dog.... :shock: I am so sad for him. Is this meant to be a short story or a free-form poem because either's cool with me, I'm just here ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: The Last Rose.
Hey Skye, lovely poem! Actually, I understand that it's not supposed to be "lovely" so I'm going to say that it's pretty. Lovely has such negative connotations... Anyway, here's a ...
Nov 15, 2010
