Threnody

Interesting. I probably would leave out the last part. Because the whole poem is about true love and "I devote my heart to you...etc." Last part says "Oh, so your ...

POOR PHILIP PULLMAN!!! such plagiarism is making me :cry: !!! Guys... really! C'mon! Has SOMEBODY decided they liked Golden Compass tooooo much! Hey- you could have made it a continuation ...

An idea taken from me and my friends on another forum, based on the philosophy of dæmonism. If you haven't an idea what dæmons/animal personalities are, google them. :3 Here's ...

Oh dear. SOMEBODY likes violence. Umm... who is supposed to be reading this? (kids, young adults, adults, super mature adults...) I suppose it would make a good movie script. Soooo... ...

I think it's good. It's intense action in the first sentence. Although I do agree with "Oneeyedunicornhunter" (name choice?) that it is a little too fast a pace. Take it ...

I think it's good. It's intense action in the first sentence. Although I do agree with "Oneeyedunicornhunter" (name choice?) that it is a little too fast a pace. Take it ...

Chapter 1 I cannot be caught. In the red of the rising moon, a man hurried along the cobblestones. The slight tap of his wooden shoes was magnified by the ...

The Ice Sculptor The Ice Sculptor chips away at his latest work Chip chip smack Chip chip smack He is formulating a statue of himself Chip smack chip! The ice ...

Goodness!! That was pretty impressive. But I guess- Edward is the good guy, no? I suppose you could make it sound a bit more like that. But, I read the ...

My soul has shred to pieces My heart has burned to ashes My tears are meaningless As they run every single day Full of sadness My thoughts are only yours ...