Threnody

"You probably think I'm terrible for making you face more monsters," I started. They just groaned. "This was only a taste of what's to come. My house is probably in ...

"Ahem" I coughed. Ballow was attempting to get one of the armored cars to start. "I believe, being older and more experienced, I should drive." Ballow nodded. I pulled out ...

Name: Sophie Welsh Age: 15 Gender: female Reason for being at hospital: she was stabbed multiple times in a murder attempt Appearance: Long straight, thick red hair. Elegant features, graceful, ...

I was wondering what happened to you... Welcome!

Sorry jophrey but I'm just no good at reviewing this long stuff. My area is poetry, but I'll give it a shot. I loved the plot. Some stories like this ...

Very interesting. I liked it. But I think you need to describe your eye a little more. I really couldn't get the concept of you eye working against you. Did ...

I sighed. This was a new experience. I pushed a button and they all were withdrawn. They looked up at me gratefully. Most of them had heavily bleeding wounds. Chase ...

I disagree with you. You are a wonderful poet. And I liked this poem a lot. It was very powerful and moving. I know that this post is probably just ...

I can't tell what you're like from your writing! :smt005 Please tell.

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I like it. It was really nice! One small fix you could make was the arms. They look disproportioned near the bottom. Also the necks were like giraffes. Otherwise it ...

Melpomene watched the scene on her train screen. A real life situation was what they needed. What would they do if no help could come? How would they react to ...

Is it too late to help? If not here's some info; What you do is gradually eat more and more and then when you're at about normal you stay there. ...