Threnody

"If you wouldn't mind. It would be my pleasure," she answered with a smile.

Name: Cassandrea Gender: Female Age: 17 Species: Sorceress Occupation: She's a Lion Heart and she works with the mechanics aboard the ship. Appearance: She has long wavy red hair and ...

This was an amazing piece of work. I loved it. I can't wait to read more. I just made a few changes in bold~ The snow blazed around the hospital ...

Melpomene The blonde girl's name was Thalia. She remained mostly quiet but I knew she listened to us. She just watched us silently taking notes with her mind. Thalia (who ...

I absolutely loved this poem! Running out of hot chocolate almost made me cry. It was so sad. I loved your metaphors and your rich description! One thing you could ...

Okay, so I reformatted it. Hope it's easier to read.

Sirens wail around you as the sky blackens and ash falls from the sky. The world is a massive torrent of fire. The news reporters frantically yell into their microphones ...

"There is a traitor in your midst." The mah-jong sticks kept reading. Melpomene sat outside thinking about her situation. Suddenly a young silvery blonde girl appeared. She was thin but ...

give-up was for fold. got there too late. tree

Pippa was now officially a bit scared of Kylar. He had just looked at that creature and made it drop dead. She gave a bit of space between them as ...

bloated

I think that twilight was just a good book. I am SO not obsessing over Edward Cullen right now. Don't worry.

I think that it was interesting. It could have, possibly at the end gave a bigger hint to what it was in case the reader didn't quite get it. I ...

Fee stumbled through the halls looking for anyone. She was almost in tears. She couldn't find her sister, or her friends. As she wandered the mazelike hallways of the orphanage ...

Pippa scornfully left the boy behind. She kept her random searching of the orphanage. Her feet made no sound. hours passed and the sun began to rise. She looked out ...