Threnody

It didn't work.

John~ I looked over at the black clad men. "ha. As if they were fearless" I told myself. I slowly wrapped them in shadow that ate their happiness. And they ...

Yep. I'd love to do some critiquing. (I do take chocolate, lattes and sugar cubes please.) Some things I specialize in therefore enhancing the quality of the review: • Short ...

I'm praying for you! You're so brave to endure all this every day. I don't know how I could manage. You're doing a brilliant job though! Best wishes, Peace, Love, ...

One of the rules of storybooks is "no god-modding." no perfect characters kid.

"You can't trust anyone John." I said. I had pulled him out and began to talk to him in a separate room. "What about Thalia." he answered. "I know her. ...

They had picked the ideal time to attack. The wind outside howled and whipped around our clothing and hair. It was around midnight but it was quite light. I could ...

Umm. I have a feeling that this was a prologue and that the baby was only an infant. That means it doesn't have a name. The guy carrying it to ...

"I found someone!" Jake called. It wasn't John. It wasn't anybody I knew but she was holding on to life by a thread. "Get her dry!" I yelled from my ...

HI Ducati! I loved this poem a lot. It was really nice. It seems as though everyone else caught your mistakes. I am just here to say how much I ...

"Guys, everyone up. I told you you could have a break but I'll make it up later. Hurry John's drowning in the Thames. A Plague pulled him down." Used to ...

Name: John Altair Age: 14 Gender Male: Power: Can control the shadows and darkness, make them into a solid matter and use them to his advantage, and can cast horrible ...

Melpomene~ John hardly came in until past midnight. "Where were you?" I asked him. "None of your business" he answered. Like I could have expected more. But I looked at ...

This was a very heart felt poem. I loved it because I share similar memories. My cat had to be put down. She was 18 years old. I loved her ...

Beautiful. Such eloquence is almost non-existing. I loved it. I was tired of searching through poems looking for a poem that's half as amazing as this one. I only have ...