Threnody

Very beautiful and sensual. It seemed like you could see everything happening. So descriptive but in such few words. Lovely. Just a few things I corrected/edited; The wave's mighty roar ...

Very nice poem! Is it based on the Greek Myth? I like it. It illustrates a very clear message. Just a few corrections- He wants to escape, From his prison ...

Nice job. Mostly flowing, very set rhyme scheme, looks like you did pretty thorough research, and nice transitions. Unlike most poems, you didn't leave any empty spaces. Just a few ...

Wonderful job with this. 5 minutes? It usually takes me half and hour to even come up with an idea! I loved this and you should be proud of it! ...

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Overall I thought this was a great prologue. It made me really want to read more! I loved the concept and the way it lead to the problem. Only a ...

Of course! You hinted that earlier... :D

uh... somehow I got disconnected. problem solved.

Oh wow. This was so full of emotion! I loved it! It flowed very nicely and had a deep thoughtful meaning. Just a few nitpicks; Your sweet carries Umm. What ...

Very interesting. I like it. It was filled with a lot of emotion. I just fixed some punctuation~ I’m sitting in a plain white room , Filled with all my ...

Okay! :lol:

Like we can call you Bolty Wolty if we want? (JK)

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name- Enna Riddle age- 15 gender- Female appearance- Short, thick, blonde hair, violet eyes, small, svelte, fair, and a sprinkle of freckles. background- Enna grew up in a normal house. ...

That's cheating! :lol: