Threnody

Very beautiful. I loved the concept a lot. Here's some corrections in bold; I’d never liked keeping diaries. Same thing with blogs, really. They take far too (up doesn't fit) ...

Emmaline did. And Just Dance's character's speech sounded suspiciously similar to mine...

"Evil old?" I thought. The word choice was funny. "Maybe. I guess that's what this is turning into." I told them. My own father. He said I'd never become much ...

You are a Warrior in Training at the Country of Altaire training base named the Chandra. This place trains you to be an elite fighter against the Altaire Ruler, Empress ...

"I hate this." I said. It really wouldn't be that hard to just knock John out with a roundhouse kick. But I needed to know how they kept on finding ...

I approached the man cautiously. Although he did have some knowledge of the Dark Wizard, Duric, my father, you never knew with humans. They were foolish but dangerously ambitious. "The ...

Hello. I got here a bit late so it seems as if everyone's got all the problems. I think that this was a really nice beginning. You gave everyone a ...

Thanks! In cards, a fold is giving up on your hand. By saying forgiving reminisce I meant that your can't help thinking about the times you've had. Again, thanks. I'll ...

_________________________________________________________________________________________________ Character Sheet Name- Aubin Race- Elf Class- Witch (c'mon. If there is a wizard there should be a witc

Emmaline~ Tristan came home completely exhausted. I saw him come in from my position on the couch. I hated his girlfriend. She was so fake. She dyed her hair platinum ...

CHARACTERS Name: Cassandra Antamasaris Age: 17 Gender: Female Ability: She can predict the future using visions that she either dreams or sees during the day. Sometimes she can't tell the ...

Ah. I didn't read that part. :oops:

*Who's Emiliana? Were you talking about Emmaline?*

Very Nice! And Welcome to YWS by the way. I liked this poem a lot. It was very descriptive. Although the formatting was really off. I fixed it. I think ...

Can you pretty please review this? Just so you know this was a sudden impulse song. And Isaac Slade is The Fray's lead singer. They say they're not a Christian ...